not too fukking bad "hey? three tonnes of ganj if i may..." - this got me cracking. all the small typos aside, simply WAY better than most of the verses by our compatriots writing about "ridin' on chrome", "selling dope" and other such-like gangstafied dung.

A couple of notes though:
"parked on double-yellows in the middle of THE town"
"i have the time to assesS my situation"
"it was a hunt and i was the prEy"
"show me THE direction and im off, homie"

Rhymes like "startLed - started", "bitch-rich", "gun-fun" and "shoes-lose" might wash, but not when they are at the end of lines.

Sorry, that was the English teacher in me speaking